2015年3月14日雅思写作解析及语料库
发布时间：2015-03-20 09:58 编辑：川外雅思培训中心
摘要：2015年3月14日雅思写作解析及语料库 教学类：(新题呈现) Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and
2015年3月14日雅思写作解析及语料库
教学类：(新题呈现)
Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
两种观念评论规划图：
首段：布景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家态度
二段：正方观念的打开：必定要有关于细节的打开或例子的支撑
三段：反方观念的打开：必定要有关于细节的打开或例子的支撑
尾段：再次亮明观念+总结理由
自创雅思写作语料库：
1. strengthen the family tie v增强家庭纽带
2. daycare centers = childcare center n孩童基地
3. early childhood education institutions n孩童早教校园
4. mental growth, good charter-training and the cultivation of group experience brought about by attending nursery school 由上托儿所带来的精神生长，性格练习以及集体性经验的培育。
5. learn to communicate and associate with their peers v学习和同龄人沟通交往
自创范文赏析：
首段：布景介绍 + 争议焦点+ 作家态度
Children’s growth education is a great concern for a great many parents, however, not every parent have enough energy to look after their kids，so, people often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question of sending their children to childcare centers and asking their relatives to take care of them. Personally speaking, encouraging children to grow up under the care of grandparents is a superior choice although childcare center can sometimes has an auxiliary role to play.
解析：look after sb = take care of sb = see to sb = attend to sb v照看或人
解析：people often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question of A and B 大家在面临……的时分，常常堕入两难的挑选
解析：under the care of sb 在……的关照下
解析：is a superior choice v 是一个非常好的挑选
解析：has an auxiliary role to play v能够表现辅助性的效果
点评：首段特性开篇;主题清晰;文风朴素。
二段：谈及我方观念的合理性：(我的口吻)
The striking advantage of inspiring grandparents to see to their beloved children is that those kids who are in the formative years can receive custom-tailored education，due to the connection of blood tie，grandparents，in most cases，will show more enthusiasm for their children and provide intensive care. In other words, grandparents usually interact with children ceaselessly , smile at children a lot and work hard to communicate with them. However, some toddlers might be spoiled if they are solely educated by their grandparents and thus lead a undisciplined life.
解析：beloved children n心爱的孩子
解析：toddlers n初学走路的孩子
解析：children = those kids who are in the formative years n孩子们
解析：receive custom-tailored education = receive custom-made education v承受因地制宜的教学
拓宽：Spare the rod and spoil the children 孩子不打不成器
拓宽：Blood is thicker than water 血浓于水
点评：二段评论祖父母教学孩子的利害。
三段：谈及敌对观念合理性(我的口吻)
I have to concede that daycare center still enjoys some merits in helping kids grow up smoothly and healthily. More precisely, pre-school childcare centers are usually well-quipped with recreational facilities and professionally well-trained caregivers can foster the child's intellectual, language, social skills. Meanwhile, kids can acquire precious group experience and feel more childhood joy deriving from peers. Nonetheless, as for childcare center, teachers are, sometimes, too busy to provide each child with patient guidance and desirable care.
解析：daycare center = childcare center n育儿基地
解析：help kids grow up smoothly and healthily v协助孩子们顺畅地健康地生长
解析：patient guidance and desirable care n耐性的辅导和令人满意的关怀
解析：feel more childhood joy deriving from peers v感受同理人带来的趣味
解析：are usually well-quipped with recreational facilities v配备有精巧的文娱设备
点评：谈及孩童去早教基地的利害。
尾段：再次亮明观念 + 总结理由
In closing, my stand is that both grandparents and childcare centers have indispensable role to play in cultivating a healthy, happy and confident child. The best strategy is to let grandparent assume the responsibilities of taking care of children until the age of three, however, grandparents can send their kids to daycare centers to interact with other peers during the daytime or over weekends, some well-equipped swimming pool for children can serve as a good example
解析：both A and B have indispensable role to play in …… 两者在……中都可表现不可缺少的效果
解析：The best strategy is that 最佳的战略即是 ……
解析：assume the responsibilities v承当责任
解析：well-equipped swimming pool for children n设备完备的孩童游泳池
解析：…… can serve as a good example ……即是极好的例子
点评：尾段清晰照应首段观念，着重孩子最佳在三岁前由祖父母来带，但是，能够在白日或许周末的时分去孩童游泳池游玩，这样孩子生长就能够得到来自亲人和育儿基地的双方的利好。
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