2015年1月4日出击雅思写作高分论述

雅思写作考试主张考生堆集观念要走“正路”，即：1. 扩展阅览面。阅览中文相关内容也可以有效地添加考生的布景常识。2. 堆集同类论题的通用观念。

 

在文章总字数需求不变的情况下，每个阶段观念数量越多，意味着支持句的数量就可以相应地削减。如果一个阶段中含有两个观念，那么每个观念句打开一个支持句就满意字数需求了。

 

如：Charity organizations should give aid to people in the greatest need, wherever they are from, or help people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2010年1月9日A类)

 

Opponents of charity organizations only giving aid domestically, however, contend the assistance should be open to people in need no matter where they are from. To start with, it is the functionality of charity organizations to render help to those who are in great need, regardless of their nationalities. Otherwise, it may be considered as going breach of the purposes they are established for. What is more, not only can international charity assistance enhance the friendship of two nations, but also help eliminate the conflicts and misunderstandings, thereby stimulating the cultural exchanges between countries. (94words)

 

如果一个阶段只要一个观念，在坚持阶段字数不变的情况下，支持句的数量就要相应地添加。

 

如：Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A类)

 

The reason that I oppose to the above view is the unfairness and inequality this proposal may conduce to. As is known to all, historic attractions are owned by all human beings and should be shared by people from all over the world equally and without discrimination. Once this proposal being implemented, an unfavorable impression of this country would be formed in no time. There is a fear that foreign travelers may never come again. Neither do their friends nor those who gain this negative information. And this will inevitably lead to a vicious circle. (95words)

 

因而，在观念较少的情况下，能否将观念充分地打开变成满意字数需求的关键所在。

 

其次，怎么打开一个观念，关键在于是不是可以灵活运用证明方法。常用的证明方法包含：解说(explanation)，延伸(extension)，举例(exemplification)和比照(contrast)等，如：

 

A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. (第二句为解说证明)(《剑6》Test 4)

 

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. (第二句为延伸证明) (《剑5》Test 2)

 

To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(第二句为举例证明)(《剑8》Test 3)

 

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (第二句为比照证明)(《剑5》Test 2)

 

以上即是经过几个十分具体的比如介绍的雅思写作高分窍门中怎么打开观念，打开论述方面的信息，十分有用。大家在备考自个的雅思写作考试的时分，经过一段时间的练习，就可以把握这个窍门了。

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