10月12日雅思考试A类大作文范文及指导

　　雅思作文题目:

　　题目：Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors are also important. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?
 

　　2013年10月12号雅思A类大作文范文：

　　Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors are also important. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?

　　第一段：社会背景(国家的成功=综合国力的提升)+正向观点(经济衡量国家成功标准)+个人观点(经济发展作为基础+科技创新+文化发展)

　　Under current international situation, the prosperity of a country is mainly embodied in the improvement of comprehensive national strength determining a nation’s standing in the world’s order. However, some individuals deem that economic progress is a valid way to standardize the success of country. After thoughtful consideration, I am convinced that triumph of a nation should be more based on improvement of economicpower,meanwhile, it also relies on innovation of scientific strength and development of cultural strength.

　　第二段：论点(科技创新---作为主要途径方式---实现国家的成功)+论据(科技---作为核心竞争力----成为各国竞争焦点)+例证(1科技---实现能源可持续利用，解决现在与将来重大问题 2成为发展先进文化生产力内在动力+实现大众利益)+结论(科技---日益凸显——促进国家成功)

　　To begin with, the advancement and innovation of science turns into the main route and pattern to realize the prosperity of a nation increasingly. Technology, as core competitiveness, is increasinglybecoming the focus of competition between countries. For example, relying on technology can make it possible to realize sustainable utilization of resources and tackle significant existing and upcoming problems. Besides, it is also the internal impetus to develop advanced productivity and culture and makes fundamental interests of masses come true. For this point, significanceof technology is becoming increasingly prominent in promoting triumph of a nation.

　　第三段：论点(文化发展——作为重要因素—实现国家兴盛与繁荣)+论据(成为国家凝聚力与创造力的资源)+例证(1 包含精神动力与智力因素 2 提升国家综合实力与充分发挥国家创新力)+结论(文化提升——作为根本方式——实现国家繁荣)

　　In addition, the development of cultural power is also another vital factor to make a nation flourish and prosper. It gradually turns into paramount source of national cohesion and creation, as the intellectual impetus, intellectual support and ideological guarantee in the development of the modern country. For example, it contains the mental strength and intelligent factor to drive all-round improvement of country, besides, it also plays a momentous role in improving national overall quality and giving fully play to innovation capability of nation. Hence, improving cultural strength is the fundamental way to achieve flourish and prosperity of a nation.

　　第四段：论点(经济基础决定上层建筑)+论据(经济——作为文化和科技的基础——最重要的内在特性)+例证(国家成败与地位—归因于—经济实力)+结论(各国大力发展经济——以实现优势地位)

　　Admittedly, the economic basis determines the superstructure. In other words, the economic factor is the foundation of development of science and culture, becausethe improvement of economic strength is the paramount inscape of triumph of a nation. For example, the victory or defeat of countries during the competition and their status in strategic pattern can be attributed to the economic power to large extent.In peacetime, wealth is the key factor of influencing international politics, whilst, during wartime, it can be translated into military power. Therefore, countries around the world seize the opportunity to energetically develop their own economies so as to achieve the advantageous position.

　　第五段：总结观点(经济进步——国家成功的基础，科技创新与文化发展是重要部分)+得出结论(文化——作为不可替代因素——与文化科技相比较——对于国家成功)

　　To sum up, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that the advancement of economic strength is the material basis of realizing prosperity of a nation,while, innovation of science and technology and development of culture is the significant constituent part of it. Therefore, economic development is the irreplaceable factor for the prosperity of nation, comparing with innovation of science and advancement of culture.